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Heath MacDonald

94 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Dominique O'Rourke (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, recent global events have shown that Canadians cannot take secure supply chains for granted. In my riding of Guelph, we know all too well that food security is national security and that Canada’s producers are an essential part of our food sovereignty and our national sovereignty. That is why investments in infrastructure that moves Canadian food from farm to market are so important. Can the minister explain how the $1 billion food-link fund will strengthen Canada’s domestic food system, support Canadian producers and ensure that we are less vulnerable to global disruptions?”
Statement grade
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Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 5%Thanks 13%Claims 72%Positioning 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 5 wordsfood security is national security.Partly on point Thanks · 12 wordsI thank the member for all her hard work in her riding.Thanks Claims · 68 wordsWe have an ambitious $3.2-billion national food security strategy in play, the largest and, further, most invested in AFC’s history.1Partly on point We have just announced a $1-billion food link.2 We are investing in transportation, we are investing in storage and we are investing in distribution and market connections to strengthen the food supply chains to support our farmers and make them more sustainable and prosperous for years to come. Positioning · 9 wordsThis means more choice, more Canada and more control.PositioningPartly on point

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