“Mr. Speaker, Shane Ertmoed took the life of Heather Aspin-Thomas, an innocent 10-year-old girl, for sexual gratification. He should never see the light of day, according to counsel for Heather’s mom. Those are not my words. Victims are tired of hearing that the parole board is independent. They want to know whether the Liberals will repeal the laws that the independent parole board enforces that allow someone such as Shane Ertmoed to leave jail to take cooking classes that Heather will never get to take. I will look directly at the Prime Minister, who appears to be talking to somebody else. Will he commit— Some hon. members: Oh, oh! Mr. Speaker, I will look directly at the Prime Minister and ask this: Will he commit to repealing Liberal parole so our children can remain safe?”
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Average 89 / 100
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 11 wordsthe case that the member refers to is a horrible case, Partly on pointThanks · 8 wordsand my sympathies go out to the family.ThanksClaims · 54 wordsAs mentioned previously in the House, we are reviewing the act, 1and we are open to changes.Vague promiseHowever, I must remind all people viewing, Partly on pointand especially the Conservatives, that the act that currently exists to oversee these procedures was created by a Conservative government.The Corrections and Conditional Release Act is a Conservative act.2