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Steven MacKinnon

76 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Frank Caputo (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, wait until the Liberals find out who has been in charge the last 11 years. Imagine that. Right now, we do not know whether Shane Ertmoed is out figuring out the difference between a béchamel sauce and a Béarnaise sauce, while Heather’s family has to serve a psychological life sentence. The government gives empty words. I will ask this for a third time: If the Prime Minister believes in the answer his minister just gave, will he rise in the House and agree to a meeting with Heather’s family, yes or no?”
Statement grade
D
49 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 68%Positioning 21%The ask 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 30 wordsI can tell the member that we were in power this spring when we passed six pieces of criminal justice legislation on things such as hate, bail and safe spaces.1Partly on point Positioning · 4 wordsWhere was the member?Positioning Claims · 22 wordsEvery time the roll was called, he sat in his place and opposed the law-and-order agenda of the new government in Canada.2 Positioning · 12 wordsWe are the anti-crime party. We are the people taking the measures.PositioningVague promise The ask · 8 wordsThe member should get up and support them.Off point

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