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Gary Anandasangaree

105 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Arpan Khanna (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, first the minister approves it, then he gets caught and now he says they have paused it. Under the Liberals, convicted child killers are getting released for cooking classes, and now we have these guys handing out paper straws to prisoners to snort coke. The system is a complete joke. Our streets, our parks and our downtown areas are being destroyed by drugs and disorder. There should be zero tolerance for illegal drugs in our streets and in prison. Will the minister stand up today and finally end it completely, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 17%Claims 36%Thanks 10%Promise 21%The ask 16%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 18 wordsI believe I have answered this question, but let me just address the second issue that came up.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsI want to take a moment to remember Heather Thomas, who was 10 years old when she was killed.1Partly on point Thanks · 10 wordsMy thoughts are with the family of the loved one.Thanks Claims · 19 wordsI understand that the Parole Board has decided to postpone the decision that my friend opposite is referring to.2 Promise · 22 wordsOur government is committed to strengthening our criminal justice system and protecting victims’ rights. That is what we will continue to do.Vague promise The ask · 17 wordsWe are looking for collaboration from the other side in order to make constructive criminal justice reforms.Partly on point

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