“Mr. Speaker, I was looking up things that had to do with Bill C-5, and I am wondering if there is any change here. Things that were built in 18 months are the Space Needle in 1962, the Empire State Building in 1930, the Pentagon in 1941, the Alaska Highway and the Crystal Palace in 1851. I am wondering if my colleague can tell me what has been built in the 18 months since Bill C-5 was passed.”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Aside · 6 wordsthat was an interesting history lesson.AsideThanks · 3 wordsI appreciate that.ThanksPositioning · 10 wordsWe are laying the foundation for transformation in this country.PositioningVague promiseClaims · 23 wordsWe have shovels in the ground across this country, 1which has been said in question period all of this week, on major projects, 2Promise · 5 wordsand more are to come.Vague promiseReasoning · 13 wordsIt does take a bit of time to get it all in place, Positioning · 31 wordsbut I think we are proving that we are acting on our commitments in good faith in trying to urgently transform our economy to address the crisis with the United States.PositioningVague promise