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Shannon Miedema

158 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Natilien Joseph (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my colleague for her extraordinary work on the Liberal environment caucus. I urge her not to give up. Interestingly, when I was in Halifax, I saw that bus systems are now being electrified. How can our government help our SMEs invest in cleaner technologies while boosting competitiveness, creating jobs and strengthening environmental protection?”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 77%Promise 6%Aside 7%Positioning 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 90 wordsthis is the work I did for a very long time in my past life. I am very excited about our new national electricity strategy. This is going to unlock our ability to double our electricity capacity while cleaning our grid and adhering to our climate targets.1 Electric buses are one piece. Electrifying our building energy systems is another and fuelling our economy at large. I think that a lot of good work has already been done across this country by local governments, provinces and territories, and this federal government. Promise · 10 wordsWe are going to keep on working towards that objective.Partly on pointVague promise Claims · 7 wordsWe just had Energy Efficiency Day nationally.2 Aside · 5 wordsColleagues may not know that.Aside Claims · 25 wordsToday, we had experts from across every sector here on the Hill, from the steel industry to the wind industry, buildings, efficiency and clean fuels.3Off point Positioning · 15 wordsEveryone is pulling in the same direction to drive this clean economy of the future.PositioningPartly on point Aside · 6 wordsI am really excited about it.AsideOff point

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