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Gord Johns

181 words · 14 sentences · 18 clauses

Replying to Steeve Lavoie (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my colleague for his passionate speech. I have a question for him, but I also want to add to what he said at the end of his speech. He mentioned Norway, which I had the opportunity to visit this year. As we know, Norway is one of six countries in the world that has no debt and that is developing its resources in order to shift toward electrification, for example. In fact, 100% of the cars sold last year were electric. Norway is a good example in many ways. It develops its resources and sells them abroad. I sit on the Standing Committee on International Trade, where the word that comes up the most often is “predictability”. That is what Bill C‑39 provides. If my colleague is not in favour of Bill C‑39, what other ideas does he have for speeding up projects, providing predictability for businesses, encouraging investment and ensuring that projects in Canada move forward, as is the case in Norway?”
Statement grade
C–
59 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 4%Claims 66%Positioning 11%The ask 14%Reasoning 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 8 wordsI really appreciate my colleague talking about Norway, ThanksClaims · 59 wordsbecause Norway, as my colleague knows, also has a sovereign wealth fund.1 They have taken a portion of finite resources from their oil and gas industry, and they have created a fund that is $1.7 trillion right now.2 In terms of royalties alone, they earn over $200 billion a year off those royalties.3 They have taken leadership on EVs.4Partly on point Positioning · 5 wordsWhat did the Liberals do?Positioning Claims · 34 wordsThey rolled back their commitment on the EV mandate.5 They created a sovereign wealth fund, 6but they did not fund it with an excess profit tax or by taking royalties from oil and gas.7 Positioning · 8 wordsThey are letting them have a free ride.PositioningOff point Claims · 8 wordsI keep bringing it up in the House.8 Positioning · 7 wordsWe have this generational opportunity right now.PositioningVague promise Claims · 7 wordsOil and gas are posting record profits.9 The ask · 25 wordsCarve off some of those profits, invest in future generations and invest in projects for the future, like clean energy and like a transmission line.Partly on point Claims · 12 wordsInstead, they are just letting it flow to CEOs and their investors.Off point Reasoning · 8 wordsThat is exactly what this bill is like.Partly on point

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