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Anna Roberts

1181 words · 75 sentences · 91 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 97 / 100
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Greeting 1%Procedure 2%Claims 71%Reasoning 18%Thanks 1%Anecdote 3%The ask 3%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsit is always an honour to rise in this House on behalf of the residents of King—Vaughan.Greeting Procedure · 15 wordsToday, we are discussing something Canadians already understand because they are living it every day.Procedure Claims · 150 wordsCanada is in an affordability crisis. I hear it constantly in my community: Seniors worry about how long their savings will last; families are spending more on groceries and housing; and young people wonder whether owning a home will ever be possible. A senior in my riding of King—Vaughan recently shared her story with me. Maria could no longer afford her home, so she had to move. She now rents a basement apartment from another senior who relies on the rental income to help pay her mortgage and household expenses, but the homeowner is struggling too. Even with Maria paying rent, she worries she may no longer be able to afford the house. If that happens, Maria will have to move again. This is the financial reality facing two seniors in my community. One has already been forced out of her home, while the other is worried about losing hers. Reasoning · 21 wordsAfter working hard, paying taxes and contributing to this country their whole lives, this should not be what retirement looks like. Claims · 55 wordsAs shadow minister for seniors, I regularly hear from Canadians living on fixed incomes who are struggling to keep up with the rising costs. We see the consequences at food banks across this country. In King—Vaughan, organizations like the King Township Food Bank and Vaughan Food Bank are doing incredible work supporting those in need. Thanks · 6 wordsI am grateful for their volunteers, ThanksClaims · 108 wordsbut we should be concerned that so many Canadians now depend on their services. Seniors, working families and Canadians with jobs are turning to food banks because they simply cannot make ends meet. The affordability crisis is also taking a serious toll on younger Canadians. For many, the question is no longer when they will buy their first home, but whether they will ever be able to afford one. Statistics Canada reports that the average asking rent for a two-bedroom apartment in the Toronto area was $2,650 a month in the second quarter of this year.1 That is more than $31,000 annually before groceries, transportation and other necessities. Reasoning · 19 wordsIt is no wonder young adults are staying at home longer and parents are helping their adult children financially. Claims · 249 wordsA recent RBC survey found that more than half of Canadian parents with adult children between the ages of 18 and 40 provided financial support over the past year, contributing an average of more than $6,100.2 These parents are supporting their children while facing rising costs themselves in preparing for retirement. For existing homeowners, another challenge comes when their mortgages are up for renewal. This is something I understand from my previous career. Before entering politics, I spent many years in banking as a branch manager and mortgage specialist. I remember working with families in the 1980s, as mortgages came up for renewal and suddenly their payments became much harder to afford. Let us remember who was the prime minister in 1980.3 We will all remember that it was Mr. Trudeau. These were people who had jobs, made their payments and worked hard to provide for their families; then renewal time came, and they were left wondering whether they could keep the home they had worked so hard to buy. I remember the stress those conversations caused. Today, I am concerned that history is beginning to repeat itself. Canadians who took up mortgages several years ago are renewing under very different conditions. Even a few hundred dollars more each month can quickly strain a household budget. For some, that means cutting into savings or reducing spending on necessities. For others, it means questioning whether they can afford their home at all. I have seen what that does to families, Reasoning · 10 wordsand I do not want Canada to repeat that experience. Claims · 67 wordsThis weekend, Canadians will celebrate Thanksgiving. For many families, that means driving to visit parents, grandchildren, aunts, uncles, friends and relatives, but in the Toronto area, gas is now roughly 50¢ a litre more expensive than at this time last year.4 For families already struggling with rising costs, another tank of gas is one more expense to consider. Some may decide they simply cannot afford the trip. Reasoning · 19 wordsCanadians should not have to think twice on whether they can afford to spend Thanksgiving with their loved ones. Claims · 29 wordsThe Prime Minister gave Canadians a clear standard by which to judge his government. He said Canadians would judge him by the prices they see at the grocery store.5 Procedure · 5 wordsLet us apply that standard.Procedure Claims · 38 wordsStatistics Canada reported that grocery prices are 29% higher than in August 2021.6 Food Banks Canada recorded 2.2 million visits in March 2025, almost doubling the number in 2019.7 Nearly one in five food bank users was employed.8 Reasoning · 10 wordsBy the Prime Minister’s own standard, the record is clear. Claims · 38 wordsAfter 11 years of Liberal government, Canadians are paying more for the basics while the Liberals continue spending heavily on bureaucracy, outside consultants, corporate subsidies and foreign aid.9 Billions of dollars continue to be committed outside of Canada.Hidden agency Anecdote · 38 wordsI was raised by my wonderful grandparents. They taught me to be compassionate. If someone needed help, we helped them.Partly on point However, they also taught me that we have to make sure our own house is in order first.Anecdote Reasoning · 47 wordsCanada is a generous country, and we should be, but there must be a sense of priority. When seniors like Maria are worried about losing their housing, young Canadians cannot afford their first home, and working families rely on food banks, the government must put Canadians first. Claims · 57 wordsConservatives have reviewed federal spending and identified $150 billion in potential savings, including from bureaucracies, consultants, corporate welfare, foreign aid and other expenditures.10 That represents almost $10,000 per Canadian family.11 Families must make difficult financial decisions every single day. When household budgets get tight, they examine their spending, determine what is essential and find ways to save. Reasoning · 61 wordsThe federal government should be expected to demonstrate that same discipline. Every dollar the Liberal government spends was earned by a hard-working taxpayer. It could be a construction worker, a farmer, a small business owner, a young Canadian saving for a home or a senior who worked for decades to build a retirement. That money deserves to be treated with respect. Claims · 30 wordsAfter 11 years of Liberal government, Canadians should not be working hard and making responsible decisions only to wonder whether they can afford groceries, housing or their next mortgage payment. Reasoning · 27 wordsYoung people deserve a realistic path to home ownership. Families should be able to afford the basics. Seniors should be able to retire with dignity and security. Claims · 17 wordsThe people I represent in King—Vaughan are facing the same pressures as Canadians from coast to coast. The ask · 25 wordsThe Liberals need to start listening to Conservatives, get spending under control, put Canadians first and focus on making life more affordable here at home. Claims · 5 wordsCanadians have done their part. The ask · 10 wordsIt is time for the government to do its part. Procedure · 8 wordsThat is why I am supporting this motion.Procedure

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