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Kevin Lamoureux

105 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Mel Arnold (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the parliamentary secretary provides us so much fuel for questions for him that I am going to run out of time even explaining some of them in point form. He talked about affordability measures, which we opposed simply because those affordability measures added to the unaffordability crisis that we are in right now. He was first elected in 1988, he stated. He has been with the Liberal government for almost 11 years, and we have seen the cost of its ever-increasing deficits. The Liberals’ original prime minister, Trudeau, promised a tiny deficit of I think $15 billion. They have blown through that, year after year after year. Now we have trillions of dollars in debt. The parliamentary secretary talked about building the economy, but we have seen what the Liberals are doing. They are building an economy for Liberal and Brookfield friends. Will he agree and admit that Canada is in an affordability crisis?”
Statement grade
D–
41 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 7%Positioning 37%Reasoning 22%Promise 12%Claims 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI have a couple of quick points.Procedure Positioning · 17 wordsOne is that there seems to be a preoccupation with how long I have been a parliamentarian.Positioning Reasoning · 23 wordsI can assure the member, and I will defend the leader of the official opposition, that there is a role for career parliamentarians. Positioning · 22 wordsWhat is important is that we serve our constituents first and foremost, something that I take a great sense of pride in.Positioning Promise · 13 wordsThey are my first priority and they always will be my first priority.Off pointVague promise Claims · 23 wordsIn regard to the other issue, the member can look at the seniors’ dental program. That is a program that the Conservatives opposed.1Partly on point

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