“Madam Speaker, I congratulate my colleague on his excellent speech and the many points he made. I would him to tell me more about the forestry industry and the problems it faces. At the northern end of my riding, the St‑Michel sawmill has been closed since August, not of this year, but last year. It is currently in court, trying to find a solution. What can the government do to help the forestry industry?”
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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordsthe government is so out of touch.PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 66 wordsWhen we look at the number of jobs in each economic sector, the forestry sector ranks first.1There are more jobs in Canada’s forestry sector than in the energy sector and the auto sector.2What is the government doing to support this sector?Absolutely nothing.Some of the forestry companies in my riding are still waiting for the federal government to provide any assistance at all.3Positioning · 4 wordsThat, too, is outrageous.Positioning