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Branden Leslie

100 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Mario Simard (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, I just listened to my colleague’s response. I wonder if he is aware that the Auditor General released a report on the excise tax today. In it, she pointed out what everyone understands: The wealthy benefit the most. I realize, as he correctly pointed out, that we need targeted measures for farmers and truckers. Their livelihoods must not be jeopardized by the rising cost of diesel and gas. That said, we realize that a one-size-fits-all approach ends up helping the wealthiest while leaving behind those who are genuinely in need. Should we not find a more coherent approach to reducing fossil fuel taxes?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 14%Claims 25%Reasoning 61%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI will reject elements of that because I can watch the supply chain work.Procedure Claims · 25 wordsLet us take a chicken barn producing chickens.Partly on point It takes diesel to transport them to the processor and the grocery store at very high prices. Reasoning · 61 wordsPeople are then putting that chicken back on the shelf because they cannot afford it and are trying to make tough decisions about what healthy food to put on their children’s plates. It is directly impacting everybody across Canada, at any income level. Those with the lowest incomes who are facing high food prices are making difficult choices for their children.Partly on point

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