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Anju Dhillon

86 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Scot Davidson (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I have just a simple question for my colleague. It frustrates Canadians when they cannot get a simple answer, so I am going to give my colleague an opportunity. The member for Toronto—St. Paul’s struggled with answering the question, so I have a simple one: Is there an affordability crisis in Canada, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 78%Reasoning 5%The ask 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 53 wordsthe cost of living is at the forefront of every conversation at every kitchen table, among our colleagues and when people approach our offices, the offices of members of Parliament.Unearned certainty We are struggling as a society, and as I explained in my speech, it is very much due to external factors as well. Reasoning · 4 wordsWe cannot ignore these, Claims · 14 wordsso we are presenting programs over and over that the Conservatives keep voting against.Vague promise The ask · 15 wordsMaybe if they started voting with us to help Canadians, that would help affordability issues.Off point

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