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Nathalie Provost

79 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Dominique Vien (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, next week, families will gather to celebrate Thanksgiving. However, according to studies, the cost of that traditional meal will be 10% higher than it was last year. For far too many Canadians, simply gathering around the table with family is becoming a luxury. That is why our party has brought forward a motion, which is being debated today, to recognize the reality that these families face every time they go to the grocery store. Does the government acknowledge that, after 11 years of Liberal rule, Canada is officially in the midst of a cost-of-living crisis?”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
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Positioning 49%Claims 51%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 30 wordsthis is indeed an extremely important issue for Canadians and for Quebeckers. That is why our government is taking action on multiple fronts to make life more affordable for Canadians.PositioningVague promise Claims · 40 wordsToday, the Prime Minister announced a $2-billion measure that will benefit one million households across Canada.1 This will represent savings of up to $2,000 a year.2 Not only will this help improve affordability, but it is good for the climate.Partly on point Positioning · 9 wordsThat is what building Canada well is all about.PositioningOff point

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