“Mr. Speaker, after 10 years of failures in military procurement, the Liberals found a solution: create even more bureaucracy. The Defence Investment Agency has yet to deliver any new equipment to our military members, and its chief executive officer reportedly wanted to leave because he was frustrated with the slow pace of the system. However, with Bill C‑40, the Liberals want to turn this agency into a Crown corporation. Our military does not need a new agency. It needs equipment. Why is the Liberals’ answer to failure even more bureaucracy?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 87 wordsanyone who is paying attention would know that the Defence Investment Agency, over the last 12 months, has done a lot to deliver for our armed forces.Unearned certaintyWe are in contract award for new aircraft.1We are in contract award for armoured vehicles.2We are advancing projects such as submarines and AEW&C aircraft.3All these things are happening.Bill C-40 would give our Defence Investment Agency a more commercially minded organization that could do things faster and do much more than just buy things for the military.4