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Stephen Fuhr

109 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, what we are seeing with the Defence Investment Agency is that they are already picking winners. We know that Saab’s GlobalEye aircraft was selected as the preferred option, without any real competition and without proper consultation with the Royal Canadian Air Force. Now, with Bill C‑40, we run the risk of further reducing parliamentary oversight. Will the minister guarantee that no contract will be awarded under the table?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
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Positioning 24%Procedure 13%Claims 63%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordspart of the question was incoherent, PositioningOff pointProcedure · 14 wordsbut let me address the part of it that I think I could hear.Procedure Claims · 48 wordsBill C-40 would still have all the safeguards for oversight and government accountability that we have in the system we have right now.1 With regard to the member’s comment about the GlobalEye, we did the necessary analysis to make the choice to download Saab as the preferred supplier.2 Positioning · 5 wordsThis is great for Canada.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsThese airplanes are built in Canada.3 They could be militarized in Canada for our own needs and exported to the world. Positioning · 15 wordsThis is good for Canadian jobs, good for Canada and good for our armed forces.PositioningPartly on point

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