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Jennifer McKelvie

114 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Jacob Mantle (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Habitat for Humanity said this week that Canada is an outlier for all the wrong reasons. Canada is now the place where people who do not own a home have the least hope of ever owning one, as 56% of Canadians who do not own a home say they never will. That is twice the global average and the highest of any country surveyed. Yesterday, the Prime Minister stood here and claimed that housing affordability has improved. We know that is all talk and no action. If affordability has improved, why is Canada a place where Canadians do not believe they will ever own a home?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 13%Claims 65%Positioning 17%Procedure 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI would like to start by thanking Habitat for Humanity for the work it does.Thanks Claims · 27 wordsI am very excited that this summer in Ajax, with the help of the housing accelerator fund, we found land for Habitat for Humanity to build upon.1 Positioning · 19 wordsThat is just part of our plan for young Canadians across the country from coast to coast to coast.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsWe have introduced the GST rebate for new homebuyers, 2which is helping our youth in this country to buy a home, Partly on pointProcedure · 6 wordsbut we are not stopping there.ProcedureVague promise Claims · 26 wordsWe are also investing in housing-enabling infrastructure. We are working with Ontario and B.C. to bring down development charges. That reduces the cost of a home.Partly on point

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