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Gary Anandasangaree

60 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Hardy (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the independent officers of Parliament are all sounding the alarm, one after the other. The Information Commissioner of Canada recently wrote to the Senate to warn it that the Liberal government is concealing more and more records and shunning transparency. This week, we learned from the foreign influence transparency commissioner that just 1% of foreign agents have registered in the two years since the law was passed. Yesterday, the Prime Minister asked us to give him a break because he just got here. Are the Liberals not interested in protecting Canada’s democracy in a world that has never been so divided and dangerous?”
Statement grade
C+
67 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 17%Claims 83%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 10 wordsprotecting Canada’s democracy is our collective responsibility in this House. Claims · 50 wordsI can assure the member opposite that we have a system that is working.Unearned certainty We have a commissioner who is engaged and who is working to ensure that those who are required to register will register.Vague promise If people do not comply, we have laws in place to hold them accountable.1

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