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Joanne Thompson

86 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Clifford Small (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, selling out our fishing industry to foreign interests is not nonsense. I would have the member for St. John’s East understand that. The Prime Minister and the President of France two weeks ago announced a 1,500-tonne quota of crab to be caught in waters that are controlled by Canada. The Minister of Fisheries expressed her disappointment. The Canadian fishing industry deserves better. Will the Prime Minister stand today with our fishing industry and stop this giveaway, or has he already sold it out to foreign interests?”
Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Signal
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Aside 50%Reasoning 22%Positioning 28%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 43 wordsit is nice to hear the member stand in the House again. It has been a long time since we have heard from him. I want to take this opportunity to see if he still believes that our school nutrition program is garbage.1Aside Reasoning · 19 wordsLet me remind him that we are facing a time in our country when we need to come together. Positioning · 24 wordsNewfoundlanders and Labradorians understand this. The constituents in his riding understand this.Partly on point It is a shame that he still has to play cheap politics.PositioningOff point

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