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Adam van Koeverden

107 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Laila Goodridge (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadian families are facing their most expensive Thanksgiving yet, up 10% from last year, which was up 10% from the year before. Far too many Canadians know the feeling of watching the grocery store till tick up faster and faster each time they go and wondering how they are going to make ends meet. Families are already struggling to put food on the table. Now, even sitting down to a Thanksgiving family dinner is out of reach for too many. Thanksgiving should be a time for families to come together, yet they are wondering how they are going to make this work. Does the Liberal government even care that families cannot afford a Thanksgiving this year?”
Statement grade
D–
40 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 25%Claims 59%Positioning 10%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 27 wordsthe real question is what we are doing collectively in this House, with the abilities we have, to answer those calls for a little bit of help.Procedure Claims · 63 wordsThe member of Parliament for Fort McMurray—Cold Lake might want to explain to her 20,772 constituents, who received $7.9 million through the groceries and essentials benefit, that she did not support it.12 She could also sit down with some of the military members, seeing as Cold Lake is a large military community. She also voted against a pay increase for those military members.3Off point Positioning · 11 wordsWe have a chance in the House to work on affordability.Positioning The ask · 6 wordsThe member could get on board.Partly on point

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