“Mr. Speaker, I am very happy to ask a question of my colleague from Kings—Hants. He referred to a big announcement today about heat pumps. Can he repeat to me what the benefits are of the great project he referred to?”
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Procedure 2%Thanks 20%Claims 66%Anecdote 11%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordsI will with pleasure.ProcedureThanks · 34 wordsMy hon. colleague is someone with a lot of experience in the economy and someone who worked at the OECD prior to joining politics.1In fact, she was our ambassador and proudly served Canada.2ThanksClaims · 76 wordsToday’s announcement by the Prime Minister was about trying to support 800,000 homes across the country.3It will allow anyone who is below the provincial median income to be eligible for up to a $10,000 grant to install a heat pump.4Anyone who is above the provincial median income will be eligible for a $2,000 grant.5This is investment in Canada.It will support manufacturing at home, but it will also lower energy bills for beneficiaries.Anecdote · 19 wordsI think of a lot of my own constituents who do not have the ability to make this happen.AnecdoteClaims · 33 wordsWe have seen it happen in the Atlantic.This is a great national program that I know will make a difference in the members’ riding, in my riding and indeed across the country.Unearned certainty