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Jaime Battiste

133 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kristina Tesser Derksen (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank the parliamentary secretary for his speech. I know he is very involved in advocating for indigenous communities. He is the chair of our national Liberal indigenous caucus, and I have learned a lot from him. We know that when there are pressures with respect to affordability, marginalized communities often feel them more acutely than others. I wonder if my colleague could speak to the different programs and benefits our government has introduced and how they specifically affect the indigenous communities in his riding and across the country.”
Statement grade
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Average 87 / 100
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Claims 58%Positioning 32%Reasoning 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 77 wordswhen I became a member of Parliament in my community of Eskasoni, child poverty rates there were at 75%.1 If my son was going to school, that would be the majority of his classmates. One of the reasons I have been so proud is that our government, since 2024, has put a national school food program in place, 2and today I can say those children receive a healthy breakfast when they go to school in our communities. Positioning · 11 wordsIt is one of the things I am most proud of.Positioning Reasoning · 13 wordsWe need to help Canadians. We need to continue to support marginalized communities.Partly on point Positioning · 32 wordsI am really proud of the efforts of our government to ensure that all of the families who need help in my community and many others across Canada are able to benefit.Positioning

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