Replying to The question on notice, as the Chair read it ()
“Mr. Speaker, those apprentices desperately need projects to go forward that they can work on. Canada faces an unemployment crisis, most severe among youth, yet this Liberal costly credit card budget plans further increases to EI premiums. Increasing the tax on jobs now would make it harder for businesses to create jobs and would make the jobs crisis even worse. Why are the Liberals paying for their costly credit card budget with further tax increases on jobs? That is the question that was put on notice.”
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Average 64 / 100
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Greeting 5%Positioning 17%Claims 55%Procedure 22%
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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 8 wordsit is great to be here this evening.GreetingPositioning · 7 wordsWe are always interested in constructive proposals.PositioningClaims · 22 wordsWhat is interesting is that the member opposite’s question has nothing to do with the question that has been put on notice, Partly on pointProcedure · 15 wordsbut that is okay.I will answer the question that was put on notice anyway.ProcedurePositioning · 16 wordsIn an increasingly fragmented and uncertain world, our government is concentrating on what it can control, PositioningVague promiseClaims · 15 wordswhich is maintaining fiscal sustainability while making targeted high-impact investments in Canadians and the economy.Positioning · 4 wordsThat is responsible leadership.PositioningClaims · 49 wordsIt means investing in a brighter future while protecting Canada’s fiscal strength, the lowest net debt-to-GDP ratio in the G7, a sound fiscal position and a clear path to long-term sustainability.1In fact, by investing strategically and responsibly today, we are positioning Canadians to benefit from a stronger tomorrow, Partly on pointVague promiseProcedure · 20 wordsand at the same time, our fiscally disciplined approach— Garnett Genuis: Madam Speaker, I rise on a point of order.Procedure