Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Yasir Naqvi

157 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

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Greeting 11%Claims 47%Procedure 5%Thanks 18%Promise 16%Aside 3%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsit gives me great joy to celebrate the St. Luke’s Family Fun Fest and Ottawa Centre Cup.Greeting Claims · 22 wordsIt is one of the largest community events in my riding during the summer. It is about basketball and bringing community together, Procedure · 8 wordsbut we do not just stop at basketball.Procedure Claims · 52 wordsOf course, we have a barbecue and ice cream and activities for the kids. It has been such an amazing gathering year after year in my community. This year was special because we got to partner with the St. Luke’s basketball community. They really have taken charge of this incredible community event. Thanks · 29 wordsI want to give special thanks to Mahamat Haggar, Aman Ehdego, Achuil Lual and the entire team for partnering with my community office and putting this incredible event together.Thanks Promise · 25 wordsI am really looking forward to celebrating our community in Centretown once again next year with St. Luke’s Family Fun Fest and Ottawa Centre Cup. Aside · 4 wordsDo not miss it.Aside

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