Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jamil Jivani

135 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Claims 60%Positioning 40%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 25 wordsthis Thanksgiving, many moms and dads will go into debt, putting groceries on credit cards because they do not have enough cash in the bank. Positioning · 31 wordsLiberals in Ottawa will say there is nothing they can do about it, but the reality is that Liberals could take action now if they cared enough to confront big business.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 56 wordsThe Competition Bureau of Canada has spent years advocating for more competition in the grocery industry to lower food prices.1 The policy ideas are out there, ideas to stop property controls from blocking market entry, ideas to empower independent and online retailers, ideas to enforce clear unit pricing rules, but Liberals will not adopt those policies. Positioning · 23 wordsLiberals will not confront big business. Instead, Liberals will use big government to enrich big business while hard-working Canadians struggle to afford food.Positioning

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