Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Ryan Turnbull

180 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 87 / 100
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Claims 38%Positioning 6%Thanks 11%Reasoning 33%The ask 12%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 42 wordslast Saturday, I was proud to join survivors, families and advocates at the Walk to End Intimate Partner Violence, in Durham region.1 Sadly, statistics show that more than four in 10 women in Canada will experience intimate partner violence in their lifetime.2 Positioning · 11 wordsBehind those numbers are our friends, neighbours, co-workers and loved ones.Positioning Thanks · 19 wordsToday, I want to recognize the organizations working every day in my region to support survivors and prevent violence.Thanks Claims · 27 wordsVictim Services of Durham Region, Herizon House and Safety Network Durham are just a few organizations of many trying to stop intimate partner violence in Durham region.3 Reasoning · 59 wordsAs a father of three daughters, I believe that ending violence starts at home with the values we pass on to our children. Respect must always come first, and we must teach boys and men that they have a responsibility to be allies and develop healthy relationships. We must challenge harmful behaviour and help end the cycle of abuse. The ask · 22 wordsLet us continue working together to build communities where safety, dignity and respect are the norm and where violence has no place.Vague promise

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