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Nathalie Provost

109 words · 9 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Patrick Bonin (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, the Liberal-Conservative alliance in support of Bill C-39 is putting us on a fast track to dirty oil. If they are prepared to move quickly, then we must be prepared to act just as quickly. On Tuesday, the Liberal MP for West Vancouver—Sunshine Coast—Sea to Sky Country condemned Bill C-39. Yesterday, the Cold Lake First Nations asked the courts to overturn the decision to fast-track the Pacific Link pipeline. We need to follow these examples. The Bloc Québécois calls on all those who still care about the environment to unite against Bill C-39. Is there anyone on the other side who still cares?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 15%Positioning 9%Promise 32%Reasoning 25%Claims 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordsI would like to thank my colleague for his question, which is a very important one.Thanks Positioning · 6 wordsWe do care about the environment.Positioning Promise · 7 wordsWe are committed to tackling climate change.Vague promise Positioning · 4 wordsThese are important issues, PositioningReasoning · 12 wordsbut to achieve our goals, the whole of Canada must work together. Claims · 9 wordsThat is what Bill C-39 is designed to do. Promise · 12 wordsYes, there are ways to improve it, and we will do so, Vague promiseClaims · 12 wordsbut Bill C-39 does not lower environmental standards.1 It amends the process.2 Reasoning · 15 wordsOnce everyone understands the whole process, which involves the provinces and Canada, we will succeed. Promise · 16 wordsWe will tackle climate change, we will have clean energy and we will build Canada well.Vague promise

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