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Ryan Turnbull

116 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Michael Cooper (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, as we head into Thanksgiving, the latest StatsCan jobs report is in, and the numbers are devastating: nearly 70,000 jobs lost in September. That is on top of the 42,000 jobs lost in August. Unemployment is up, and Canada has the second-highest unemployment rate in the G7. In the face of these dismal jobs numbers, does the Prime Minister take any responsibility?”
Statement grade
F
31 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 68%Positioning 32%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 79 wordsthis Thanksgiving, Canadians should know that we are stepping up to support them with the cost of living.Vague promise We have cut taxes on income, housing, fuel and new business investment, 1while we have moved forward with affordability measures like the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, 2which will put $1,890 over the course of the next year in families’ pockets.3 We also moved forward with the home retrofit program, which was announced just yesterday, 4and the national school food program.5 Positioning · 37 wordsDo members know what the missing ingredient is at this Thanksgiving dinner? It is the Conservative Party being willing to stand up for Canadians. We have not seen that for some time in this House.Off point It would—PositioningPartly on point

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