“Madam Speaker, after 11 years of the Liberal government, arbitrary and out-of-control taxation is only making matters worse. This Thanksgiving, Canadian families are paying more just to put food on the table. Dalhousie University estimates that a Thanksgiving turkey dinner will cost 10% more this year. Meanwhile, Canadian farmers, including farmers in Bow River, are facing the most expensive harvest in history. Conservatives have a plan to save Canadians money, but the Liberals are all talk and no results. Would the Liberal government finally admit that, after 11 years, Canada is officially in an affordability crisis?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 78. The grade is held to 75, 30 above Signal.
75 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 20%Aside 30%Claims 40%Promise 10%
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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsas this is my last chance before Alberta votes on October 19, I wanted to start by saying that, 1ProcedureAside · 28 wordsif we say we are going to “stand on guard for thee”, we can stand in line to vote and make sure we vote when the referendum comes.AsideOff pointClaims · 38 wordsOn the question the member asked, I want to identify that, in Alberta, we created 83,000 jobs in the last year.2Rents are down, 3and housing prices are down.4Affordability is a concern.There is more to do, Promise · 9 wordsand we will do it with that member’s support.Partly on pointVague promise