Analysis · Question Period answer · beta

Jill McKnight

85 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Michael Barrett (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I appreciate the response, but what veterans are looking for is an answer. They are looking for a date by which they will have a review and an answer on accessing the benefits they have earned. They have done their job. They have served Canada with unlimited liability. It is time for the government to step up, end the backlog of 10,000 applications and deliver for veterans. The question is very simple: By what date will the minister and her department deliver zero above that service delivery standard?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 84%Positioning 8%Promise 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 17 wordswe know that for a veteran who is waiting for their benefits, any timeline can feel challenging, Positioning · 7 wordsand we are here to support them.Positioning Claims · 54 wordsThat is why we have reduced the average processing time by 57% since 2021.1 At the same time, we have also seen an increase of 90% in the number of applications for disability benefits over the past decade.2 We are making the investments to stabilize and modernize service delivery.Vague promise The work is under way, Promise · 7 wordsand I will have more to share.Partly on pointVague promise

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