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Jaime Battiste

77 words · 3 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Billy Morin (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, here is another opportunity for something new. Treaty chiefs are not the only ones calling out the Liberal government. The AFN national chief that said that those at the Major Projects Office “don’t know what they are doing when it comes to First Nations” and that it is a pattern for this government and its MPO CEOs to act like they are too good to meet with chiefs. The truth is that treaty rights do not disappear when they become inconvenient for Liberals. Chiefs are tired of the announcements and photo ops, so why did the Prime Minister create a Major Projects Office just to disrespect chiefs and cover his failures on building major projects in this country?”
Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Positioning 14%Promise 86%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordson this side of the House we believe in economic reconciliation.Positioning Promise · 66 wordsThat means, when we are advancing projects that are important to this country, that we ensure we are advancing indigenous interests, Vague promisewhich means, and I will say it again for the other side so they hear it loud and clear, we are making sure it is meaningful partnership, meaningful equity and meaningful participation in all projects moving forward.Vague promise Indigenous communities will build together with the government.Partly on point

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