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Mike Kelloway

79 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Gord Johns (NDP)
“Madam Speaker, British Columbians rallied last month demanding fair federal ferry funding. First nations, local governments, the B.C. Chamber of Commerce, unions and residents delivered the same message. Ottawa covers 43% of East Coast Ferries’ operating costs and invests hundreds of millions of dollars in infrastructure, which we support, but B.C. gets just 3% and loans that ferry users must repay. With fares facing 30% increases, will the government finally modernize B.C.’s 50-year-old agreement and fairly fund B.C.’s marine highway?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 28%Claims 35%Promise 37%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsthe marine sector on the west coast is important to this Canadian government. We want a productive, efficient and effective marine sector.Positioning Claims · 28 wordsWhen it comes to ferries in British Columbia, it is a Crown corporation, BC Ferries, that is regulated by the province.1 We do provide substantial monies toward operating, Promise · 29 wordsbut we will be on the side of BC Ferries where it makes sense because it is important to British Columbians and, for that matter, its important to Canadians.Partly on pointVague promise

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