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Sébastien Lemire

133 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Jacques Ramsay (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, when watersheds are shared, the legislation provides a framework for collaboration that allows first nations, provinces, territories and the federal government to work together while respecting existing jurisdictions. Does my hon. colleague from Abitibi—Témiscamingue see this approach as beneficial and likely to ensure that the law stands the test of time?”
Statement grade
B+
84 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Reasoning 21%Claims 74%Positioning 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 5 wordsthat is the great challenge. Claims · 22 wordsIf the past is any indication, the trust that first nations themselves place in the government on this fundamental issue is low. Reasoning · 17 wordsThe government has a responsibility to demonstrate consistency, predictability, leadership and the most fundamental form of respect, Claims · 14 wordswhich is enshrined in the United Nations Declaration on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples.1 Positioning · 6 wordsI have concerns in that regard, PositioningPartly on pointClaims · 63 wordsbecause the mechanisms have not been agreed upon in advance by first nations members themselves. All of this is already set out in the first draft of the bill. Now that the government has a majority, what we are essentially being told is that the government is unlikely to change anything and we will have to work with what has already been decided.2 Reasoning · 6 wordsThat is not how it works.Partly on point

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