“Mr. Speaker, with the federal government investing, using borrowed taxpayer dollars, in the very companies that will be tendering bids and offering their models of equipment for purchase by the Canadian government, how do we know that we will get the best value for our dollar? How is it not a conflict of interest that the very people making the decisions on what equipment the government is going to buy have money invested in these defence companies?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 72. The grade is held to 70, 30 above Clarity.
70 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 34%Reasoning 57%Promise 9%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 wordsin our defence industrial strategy, we have three pillars: 1build, partner and buy.Reasoning · 50 wordsWe have to make sure that Canadian companies are involved in the building of the maximum possible quantity of defence equipment and defence supplies.Vague promiseThat is the reason we have to make sure that Canadian companies are always at the head of the line when it comes to defence procurement.Vague promiseClaims · 17 wordsWe have made the commitment to go from 30% to 70% Canadian content in our defence spending.2Promise · 8 wordsThat is something we will definitely adhere to.Partly on point