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Cheryl Gallant

111 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Rhéal Éloi Fortin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to hear my colleague’s views on the 5% of GDP that NATO requires for defence spending. Personally, I thought the government would be investing in buying tanks or airplanes or recruiting new soldiers. Instead, it seems to be investing primarily in organizational structures. There was going to be an agency, and now it will be a corporation. There was going to be a director, but now they will be called something else. I do not know what the person’s title will be, but their salary will be at least double that of their predecessor. The government is tinkering with structures. All of this comes at a cost to Canadians and Quebeckers. At a time when everyone is tightening their belts and being asked to pay more, the government is spending money not on improving our defence capabilities, but on creating new structures and jobs for the Prime Minister’s friends. This strikes me as a highly questionable way of meeting the NATO target. What does my colleague think?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 7%Reasoning 59%Procedure 7%Claims 26%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 8 wordsthe member from the Bloc is absolutely right.Positioning Reasoning · 38 wordsThe 5%, 1.5% of which can go into infrastructure or a soft cost for the military, is only a piece of it.1 The other money is supposed to actually go into national defence to make our country safer.Partly on point Procedure · 8 wordsWhat was mentioned earlier was the Coast Guard.Procedure Claims · 29 wordsThe fact is that other countries’ coast guards, which are included in the NATO calculation of 3.5% for the equipment, are actually armed.2 Our Coast Guard is not armed.3 Reasoning · 28 wordsAll it would be doing is what it should have been doing already, and that is sharing information with defence, based on what it sees on the oceans.Partly on point

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