“Mr. Speaker, it is important for us to recognize that the newly elected government, with the Prime Minister’s providing a very clear indication that we want to be able to hit the 2% of GDP spending for our Canadian Forces, is going to go far beyond that over the coming years. Part of that is to ensure that we are able to meet the needs of our Canadian military through a tendering process. A Crown corporation is the best way to ensure that it becomes more efficient, accountable and transparent. I would like the member’s thoughts on my general comment.”
Statement grade
D
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 67. The grade is held to 47, 30 above Signal.
47 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 49%Thanks 13%Positioning 20%Promise 18%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsI almost wish I could respond to the question again, ProcedureThanks · 8 wordsbecause I think that was an excellent response.ThanksPositioning · 12 wordsIt is the best way to be able to achieve those goals.PositioningProcedure · 20 wordsAs the member on this side of the House mentioned, we do have a very big goal ahead of us.ProcedurePromise · 11 wordsI think we will be meeting target as we move forward.Vague promise
