Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 7%Claims 58%Procedure 1%Reasoning 34%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsI rise to honour an extraordinary individual.ThanksClaims · 53 wordsNavi Pillay was born in Durban, the daughter of a bus driver.1In a country that told her where she could sit, where she could study and who she could be, she became a lawyer anyway.She defended those who dared to resist apartheid.She secured basic rights for prisoners on Robben Island.2Procedure · 1 wordsEventually, ProcedureClaims · 29 wordsas a judge, she helped establish that mass rape can be an act of genocide.3She stood up for human dignity as the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights.4Reasoning · 20 wordsShe spent her life insisting that justice is not a gift from the powerful but a promise to the powerless.Claims · 8 wordsToday, at 85, she is a Nobel laureate.5Reasoning · 32 wordsHer life shows us that justice does not advance on its own.It advances because someone is willing to carry it year after year into rooms where it is often not welcome.Thanks · 4 wordsI congratulate Justice Pillay.Thanks