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Michael Guglielmin

188 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 100 / 100
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The question 3%Claims 27%Reasoning 47%Promise 17%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, The question · 6 wordsare “the bad people” coming back? Claims · 17 wordsA four-year-old boy in Ontario was still asking that question 16 months after an armed home invasion.1 Reasoning · 23 wordsNo child should have to carry that fear. No parent should have to wonder whether they can promise to keep their child safe. Claims · 33 wordsFor families in Vaughan and across Canada, the trauma does not end when the intruders leave. It follows them into every sleepless night, every unexpected noise and every single knock at the door. Reasoning · 14 wordsThat is why today, I introduced a bill to keep us safe at home.2 Promise · 32 wordsMy bill would create a distinct violent home invasion offence with a five-year mandatory minimum sentence and a maximum of life imprisonment.3 It would also make this a reverse onus bail offence.4 Reasoning · 43 wordsOur laws must recognize the gravity of criminals forcing their way into somebody’s home and then terrorizing the people inside of it. Canadians should be able to lock their doors at night, put their children to bed and go to sleep without fear. The ask · 11 wordsI urge all members of the House to support the bill, Reasoning · 9 wordsbecause families deserve to go to sleep without fear.

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