Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 21 wordssome journeys are a tribute to strength, commitment and staying true to one’s values.Jacinthe Sicotte’s journey is one of them.Claims · 74 wordsToday, I would like to acknowledge her retirement as general manager of the Caisse Desjardins de Sault-au-Récollet-Montréal-Nord.2She joined Desjardins as a student at the Caisse de Granby and devoted 45 years of her life to the co-operative movement.13During her 12 years as general manager, Ms. Sicotte’s actions remained laser-focused on co-operative values, education and student retention.4She believed in Montreal-Nord, a proud, engaged and resilient community.She helped it grow and thrive.Thanks · 20 wordsToday, on behalf of the residents of Bourassa, I thank her.I want to wish Ms. Sicotte a happy retirement.ThanksClaims · 18 wordsMontreal-Nord will remember her.We already know that she still has more to give to Quebec and Canada.