Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 10%Claims 61%Reasoning 15%The ask 14%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI rise today to recognize the important work of the National Lung Health Alliance, ThanksClaims · 16 wordswhich brings together physicians, researchers and patient advocates to support and strengthen lung health in Canada.Reasoning · 21 wordsAll Canadians are directly or indirectly impacted by lung health issues, and we all stand behind efforts to improve patient outcomes.Vague promiseClaims · 69 wordsMade up of the Lung Health Foundation, Lung Cancer Canada, Asthma Canada, COPD Canada, Stop TB Canada and provincial lung associations, the National Lung Health Alliance brings a powerful and united voice to lung health issues.1The alliance is in Ottawa this week to engage with federal decision-makers in pursuit of better lung health for all of us.2Many fellow members of Parliament will cross paths with their delegation.The ask · 20 wordsI urge members to listen carefully to the stories of the alliance’s advocates and to carefully consider their expert recommendations.