Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Shannon Stubbs

169 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

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Claims 56%Thanks 7%The ask 7%Reasoning 21%Promise 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 37 wordsthe tragedy at CFB Wainwright has shaken Albertans and Canadians. Sergeant Morgan Wong and Privates Shaun Farrell, Aidan Goulding and Hayden Lykkemark lost their lives in service to Canada, 2and 39 Canadian Armed Forces members were injured.1 Thanks · 12 wordsMy deepest condolences go to their loved ones and their fellow soldiers.Thanks Claims · 58 wordsMilitary and civilian first responders, paramedics, nurses and medical teams across our region answered the call without hesitation. For military families and frontline workers, all whose lives changed forever, the impact will be felt for years to come. In the face of such loss, Canadians are asking how they can help. One real way is to donate blood, The ask · 11 wordsso if able, please give now and in the weeks ahead. Reasoning · 36 wordsFor the families who lost, the injured who face a long road to recovery and the first responders who came to help, this tragedy does not end when the headlines fade and the politicians move on. Promise · 15 wordsOur gratitude must extend beyond words, and our real support must endure long after today.

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