Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Claims 79%Reasoning 13%Promise 6%Thanks 1%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 42 wordsour Canadian Armed Forces members know when they enrol that they may be required to make the supreme sacrifice.Private Aidan Goulding, Private Shaun Farrell, Private Hayden Lykkemark and Sergeant Morgan Wong have made that sacrifice.1The army trains as it fights.Reasoning · 18 wordsIt does this to make sure it is as prepared as possible to face the challenges of conflict.Claims · 117 wordsThis is inherently dangerous.As we remember these four fallen heroes and the 39 injured in this tragedy at CFB Wainwright, let us please remember that our military personnel do not stop.23They are still training and they are still deploying in the service of Canada.It is what they do.The impact this has on the military leadership is often forgotten.They are the ones who need to inform the families and still lead the rest of the team to get back into the fight.We cannot forget the families.Trust me, there is nothing we can tell a family member, a spouse, a parent, a sibling, a child or a friend that removes the pain.Reasoning · 9 wordsThe only thing we can do is never forget.Vague promisePromise · 13 wordsAidan, Shaun, Hayden and Morgan, I will not forget.Vague promiseCanada will not forget.Vague promiseThanks · 3 wordsLest we forget.Thanks