Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Thanks 22%Claims 66%Positioning 12%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 15 wordsI rise today to honour the heroes of the Service de sécurité incendie de Saint‑Colomban.ThanksClaims · 98 wordsOn July 27, a major fire broke out in a local home.1During the response, the building floor collapsed and firefighter Éric Parent was left hanging in the air.2With no second thought, the fire chief, Marco Doucet, rushed into the flames to hold his struggling firefighter back and basically save his life.3Not to be outdone, his fellow firefighter Cyrille Ranger provided first aid professionally and efficiently within minutes.4Their quick and coordinated response saved firefighter Parent’s life and limited the severity of his injuries.Firefighters and first responders protect us and save Canadian lives every day.Positioning · 18 wordsThey are all heroes, but on July 27, Marco Doucet and Cyrille Ranger proved that by their actions.PositioningThanks · 18 wordsFor this, the people of Les Pays-d’en-Haut, Saint‑Colomban and, more specifically, Éric Parent and his family thank them.Thanks