A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 17%Reasoning 38%Procedure 4%The ask 41%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 16 wordshiring friends is already happening.The Commissionaires is the largest employer of veterans in the country.1Reasoning · 43 wordsTaking away the CRA contract and giving it to an American firm is not just a contract that was lost.2It is also meaningful employment opportunities and cultural relevance for Canadian veterans to work, after their service, with their friends and their peers.Procedure · 5 wordsNow it has been lost, ProcedureClaims · 3 wordsand for $80,000.3The ask · 46 wordsHere is a solution to give the contract back to the Commissionaires and secure Canadian veterans’ jobs: How about the Prime Minister not spend $160,000 in catering on his next flight, 4and use that money to make up the difference that the contract was lost by?