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Wayne Long

47 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Canadian Corps of Commissionaires was established over 100 years ago to help our veterans reintegrate into civilian life. Today, it remains Canada’s largest employer of veterans, yet the Liberal government has just withdrawn its $12-million security contract and awarded it to a subsidiary of an American company. After all that our veterans have given to Canada, is this really how the government wants to thank them?”
Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 81%Procedure 9%Positioning 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 5 wordsthe CRA prioritizes hiring veterans.1 Procedure · 4 wordsThat is number one.Procedure Claims · 33 wordsNumber two is that, with respect to this decision, it was an independent process.2Hidden agency There were selection criteria that were met.3 This is a Canadian supplier.4 It hires 8,000 Canadians across this country.5 Positioning · 5 wordsWe stand by the decision.Positioning

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