“Mr. Speaker, the Canadian Corps of Commissionaires was established over 100 years ago to help our veterans reintegrate into civilian life. Today, it remains Canada’s largest employer of veterans, yet the Liberal government has just withdrawn its $12-million security contract and awarded it to a subsidiary of an American company. After all that our veterans have given to Canada, is this really how the government wants to thank them?”
Statement grade
A–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 86 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 81%Procedure 9%Positioning 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 5 wordsthe CRA prioritizes hiring veterans.1Procedure · 4 wordsThat is number one.ProcedureClaims · 33 wordsNumber two is that, with respect to this decision, it was an independent process.2Hidden agencyThere were selection criteria that were met.3This is a Canadian supplier.4It hires 8,000 Canadians across this country.5Positioning · 5 wordsWe stand by the decision.Positioning