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Patty Hajdu

108 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Garnett Genuis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is unbelievable to me how much the minister has his head in the sand. These are Statistics Canada job numbers that were released the week before Friday. It is clear, in black and white, that we are at a 29-year low in workforce participation. I have a news flash for the minister: That is not good news. That is not “everything is fine” news. That is a five-alarm fire. When will the minister stop patting himself on the back, recognize that Canadians are struggling, and actually do something about it?”
Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 79%Reasoning 17%Positioning 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 38 wordsthe member for Sherwood Park—Fort Saskatchewan has been at committee many times, advocating for substandard education for youth through private career colleges, 1which was part of the topic that we were discussing with the opposition just moments before.Off point Reasoning · 18 wordsThat is not the kind of thing that helps retain young people and get them into good jobs.Partly on point Claims · 47 wordsIn fact, what we have is strong evidence about the work that we do to make sure young people have access to quality jobs, through Canada summer jobs and work-integrated learning, Unearned certaintyand those result in not only stronger labour force attachment but better earnings over their lifetime. Positioning · 5 wordsMaybe that member should stop—Positioning

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