“Mr. Speaker, Statistics Canada reported that Canada lost 68,300 jobs in September, amounting to 110,000 jobs lost in just two months. Young Canadians are the ones bearing the brunt of these losses. For a young Canadian trying to land their first job, build experience and save for a home, these are not just statistics. They represent lost opportunities and a delayed future. Will the Liberals reverse course on their policies that are holding young Canadians back?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 71. The grade is held to 39, 30 above Relevance.
39 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 56%Positioning 10%Promise 9%Reasoning 25%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 44 wordsI want to point out that Canada’s economy grew by 0.08% in the second quarter, 1Partly on pointand one of the leaders in that growth in the economy was the Government of Saskatchewan.2We are seeing record investment, not only in potash but in uranium mining.Positioning · 8 wordsSaskatchewan is an exciting part of our country.PositioningPromise · 7 wordsWe want to continue fostering that development, Vague promiseReasoning · 20 wordsand one of the things that has led to the excitement in Saskatchewan is that most of the federal Conservatives—Off point