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Mélanie Joly

56 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Jamie Schmale (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Mariposa Dairy in Lindsay supports 200 Ontario dairy goat farms and exports more than $60 million a year in cheese to the United States. Because of U.S. tariffs, the company is being hit with a $4.5-million bill every month. It has warned that without an immediate solution, the entire Canadian dairy goat industry will be decimated. What specifically is the government doing to secure relief for Mariposa Dairy before it is too late?”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 20%Claims 46%Promise 34%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 11 wordsI would like to commend my colleague for his important question.Thanks Claims · 26 wordsI am indeed seized with the issue. The minister in charge of FedDev Ontario is as well. FedDev has provided funding, we will provide more funding, 1Vague promisePromise · 19 wordsand we will work together on the solution because we need to make sure that Mariposa Dairy is secured.Vague promise

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