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Ruby Sahota

69 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Michael Guglielmin (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, a violent home invasion does not end when the intruders leave. Families are left lying awake fearing every noise and wondering whether it will happen again. Today, I introduced a bill to keep Canadians safe in their homes. This bill would create a distinct home invasion offence, establish a five-year mandatory minimum sentence and carry with it a maximum sentence of life imprisonment. Canadians deserve to feel safe behind their own front doors. Will the minister and the Liberal government support my bill and help ensure Canadians can feel safe in the comfort of their own homes?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 25%Claims 59%Promise 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 11 wordsit is very important that we ensure the safety of Canadians. Claims · 41 wordsWe have been working hard since being elected as a new government to work on these issues, including home invasions and break and enters.Vague promise That is why we introduced six different bills last year alone that have passed through this House.1 Reasoning · 6 wordsThere is more work to do, Promise · 11 wordsand we look forward to collaborating with other parties on it.Vague promise

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