Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Kevin Lamoureux

115 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Statement grade
B
79 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 45%Procedure 5%Claims 23%Promise 27%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 26 wordsI am disappointed that the Conservatives do not recognize that a Crown corporation is the best direction to go in when it comes to military procurement.Positioning Procedure · 6 wordsThis is for many different reasons.Procedure Claims · 26 wordsSuffice it to say that one of those reasons was part of the last election platform.1 We had indicated that it would be independent in nature. Promise · 31 wordsWe want to be able to speed up the process to better serve our Canadian military and build a stronger, healthier economy through supporting our military industrial communities throughout the country.Vague promise Positioning · 26 wordsWhy does the Conservative Party not support something that has been well established in many other areas in terms of accountability, transparency and so much more?Positioning

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