“Mr. Speaker, we have some very big concerns on this side from what we have seen and the track record of the Liberal government. The Cormorant helicopters were cancelled, and then the F-35 program was cancelled. We are hearing platitudes. What confidence can the Canadian public have in a Liberal government that has such a bad track record in procurement?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 47%Anecdote 29%Promise 15%Positioning 8%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 25 wordsyes, it is clear that the public trusts our government.Unearned certaintyThey believe we are giving our businesses the resources they need to achieve their goals.Anecdote · 42 wordsFor 20 years, I worked with businesses.1They did not have the resources to succeed.The government could issue calls for tenders, open up new sectors and create new opportunities all it wanted, but the resources were not there to support them.AnecdoteClaims · 43 wordsTake the Business Development Bank of Canada, or BDC, for example, which has adapted its financing criteria for businesses.Six years ago, businesses could not do business with the BDC because certain sectors, such as defence, were excluded.2Today, however, that is possible.3Promise · 22 wordsWe are taking a flexible approach to allow sectors within our industry to qualify again and adapt their operations to support this.Vague promisePositioning · 12 wordsWe are taking real action, Vague promiseand, yes, people can trust our government.Positioning